Comment on comic strip

I think this comic was really clever. I enjoyed the way they incorporated the many different places at Rhodes into the action. However the plot was a little boring there could have been more of a twist with the different individual characters to make the story more interesting. But the concept is a good idea, how the characters were all pirates and went to the rat and Parrot, I found this pretty humorous. The actual pictures themselves were well done but there should have been closer snaps of over exaggerated facial expression to really help create the story. I also thought the social comment was relevant, and the DP removal applies to many students who have had their DP s removed. The downfall of this comic is that they did not use Proppian characters, as there was no hero or villain, although all the characters were pirates they should have differed from one another. Maybe one could have been evil and led them on the wrong path to the treasure. Having a hero , villain and other characters would have made it more interesting.


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